Your gripe is punctuation - O dear mine is not the best as my partner keeps telling me :)My gripe is with those who write poetry and have an over use ( to my mind) of 'the'. When with a bit juxtaposition a line will sound better without that dreadful three lettered word.
When the kids are writing stories I have to limit them to one "and" per sentence. If I don't I get a sentence that run on for tw pages!
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